Does this make sense?

I've been asked to make a remix. Unfortunately the vocals are absolute complete bollocks. I tried to make a jump-up track, sounded worse than Captain's Bollocks or that Clipz Pendulum remix.

Does this make any sense? Remember its just a rough idea, all the drum will be rebuilt from scratch, there are no effects and there is absolutely no tweaking it.

http://www.dnbshare.com/download/20081227ganjatest.mp3.html

WOAH! THATS A BAD GIG

NOT MUCH TO PLAY WITH SO ITS A VALIANT EFFORT