drums are crisp but get abit repetative , like the jungle sounds .. try adding a sub in there . or a nice dark bassline, nothing to complicated but something to give the tune abit a variation. considering you have only been producing a month your doing very well. nice drum work, they just need to change about a little as there constant for a few mins with no variation... got a nice oldskool jungle feel to it tho, i like what youve tried to do mate,
check my post that i put about breaks, ... LOgiks helped me out by giving me links to a couple of tutorials , have a look at them ... theres a nice one that helps your drums sound abit jungle style...
keep it up mate, big up