GSH - Hunger (1min Clip) :: Dark Tech tune

[GSH]

Hello people,

Please have a listen to this clip and tell me what you think.

Clip >> Hunger

I have only spent a few hours on it so far and it isn't really processed at all...would just like some comments on the vibe and general sounds if possible.

It is a dark techy tune with a tech Freak sort of vibe.

Cheers

GSH

[sook]

drums sound like they are clipping...
particularly snare....
bass feels like it needs more mod
try some lfo in the reese to geta bit of movement
in the... sounds very digital and harsh
drums def need to be layered...
subs are very loud....
could use some atmospheres or pads in there
everything sounds over distorted

[GSH]

Thanks for taking the time to listen Sook.

Yes the sound is distorted and yes there is slight clipping...but it hasn't been processed or eq'd or compressed or anything yet and the drums are layered.

My own kit, layered with elements of amen, think, action.

Sub is too loud yes...will be dropping the levels on that tonight.

Will try some lfo etc for a little bit of teh wobble, tonight as well.

As for atmos...I haven't done it yet!

But thanks for the listen...will endeavout to make it sound cleaner for the next edit (which I will update the board with).

Thanks very much

GSH

EDIT: New edit...top link in mySpace player.

www.myspace.com/gsh2006

[RAkoon]

drums sound like they are clipping...
particularly snare....
bass feels like it needs more mod
try some lfo in the reese to geta bit of movement
in the... sounds very digital and harsh
drums def need to be layered...
subs are very loud....
could use some atmospheres or pads in there
everything sounds over distorted

cant add more!! this really that what can here too...

peace. respect.

[GSH]

Thanks for the comments!

Peace

[GSH]

New edit...top link in mySpace player.

www.myspace.com/gsh2006