First Tune - Liquid - Feedback Appreciated

slcbeats · Nov 13, 2014

Hi all,
This is my first tune created with Logic Pro 9. I used Lenzman's "Open Page" as a blueprint. Intending to feature female vocals on this as well.

What are your thoughts?
Big ups!

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fchristopher-winkler-2%2Ffirst-tune-liquid-drum-bass

blend107 · Nov 14, 2014

Lush piano, very nice atmospheres going on. Can hear the influence.
Transitions are also pretty nice.
Drums a little weak in low frequency areas along with sub. Snares pretty nice though.
Good effort mate, biggup

slcbeats · Nov 14, 2014

Hey,
Thanks for the feedback!
I'll take a look at the lower end stuff. This definitely helps.

dj mirry · Nov 20, 2014

Great effort mate, I love Lenzman's open letter track and really like this. Well done

slcbeats · Nov 20, 2014

Big ups dj mirry!!
Been working on blend107's feedback...completely on the money about the lower end stuff. I'll hopefully repost the tune soon. The sound of it is getting much better.
Thanks again.

slcbeats · Dec 12, 2014

Well, here is the tune with a new mix. Kicks are new, baseline is warmer, and overall sound is much better!!
Thanks for all of your feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fchristopher-winkler-2%2Fliquid-drum-bass-121114

changerltd · Dec 15, 2014

musically this is great!

look into drum layering to fill it out a bit imho theirs not enough going on in the drum department but thats just my 2 cents

Striling effort tho the musical side of it sounds great!

Huskyroc · Dec 15, 2014

That piano :love:

Visions · Dec 16, 2014

Good music, still needs way more work on drums to make it a memorable piece of music.

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