Been a while. Looking for feedback.

The tracks certainly have a nice and liquid feel to them
The drums sound a bit 'easy' though. I'm not really sure how to explain this, a bit of a poor choice of samples I think. Or it sounds a bit too 'created' too much like a sequencer, while drums should need a bit of a live feel. Try to layer a break on top of it. Just lowcut that break and put in on top. I think that will help alot
The melodies certainly work, and the synths for them sound nice as well.
One more point though: that bass... In both tracks it sounds like it's just a sine. If there is only one bass, a sine isn't interesting enough. Try adding a layer of a different sounding bass, of a highcut reese maybe..
 
The tracks certainly have a nice and liquid feel to them
The drums sound a bit 'easy' though. I'm not really sure how to explain this, a bit of a poor choice of samples I think. Or it sounds a bit too 'created' too much like a sequencer, while drums should need a bit of a live feel. Try to layer a break on top of it. Just lowcut that break and put in on top. I think that will help alot
The melodies certainly work, and the synths for them sound nice as well.
One more point though: that bass... In both tracks it sounds like it's just a sine. If there is only one bass, a sine isn't interesting enough. Try adding a layer of a different sounding bass, of a highcut reese maybe..

I worked on what you mentioned. I updated forever with a break layered in to help fill the beat. Thanks for the feedback. Still working on them.
 
Hey man !

The break is doing work ; I can feel the difference between Forever & Time. But I still think your drums needs some work cause tbh the melodic elements are nice ; especially like the ones in Forever. Just need to crisper that up. Try layering the snares / kick a bit more ; and maybe change some samples sounds to see if that works better. The kick sounds a bit muddy and weak.

On a side note I agree with pretty much everything Crizis said.

I'll maybe add adding some fx and white noises here and there to ease the transitions.

keep up the good work!
cheers
 
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