I just listen in headphones and it sounded better to me. Don't get me wrong, I do not have monitors, but I know my speakers well. There is something off about the stereo in your top bass. For example, the sweep at 11 sec sounds good, but the chomping stabs sound, right after the sweep, are weak despite the stereo spread on both the sweep and stabs sounding similar. Also, do not take it to heart because I like the song so far.