Taking some advice and changing things up (need feedback)

I've been told a lot lately to focus on the progression in my tracks, as well as to stop piling so many sounds on top of eachother, and so to get better with that I have attempted something totally different than usual. This piece is way more mellow than usual, and I have tried to focus on the flow and to make sure the sounds work well together.

Let me know what you think, all criticism is welcome!