Oversight - Reborn

its a good start but i would really like it if after say 8 - 16 bars you ret rid of the the melody as it is and put like a smooth undulating bass line with elements of the melody coming in and out. I hope you understand what i mean :)
 
pretty much what junglistguy said... this could have soOoOoOo much more energy with a punching beat :) could introduce reeces or synth stabs as well for progression. Atmosphere is lovely!!
 
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