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https://soundcloud.com/gruffsnuff/killatron hey guys thought i would share this with you as this is the first track i have made everything all synths and drum patterns please comment it would be great to hear from you

hey, really nice sound imho, good mix, it all fits well together. regarding the song/composition itself- it is good idea, but why not adding more instruments or variations ? but its just a matter of taste, dont take me serious. could you please tell me what synth u used for the instruments ? Do u mix in the box or hw -just curious. i checked also your other stuff on sc and i am fan especially of the Funkysound -cool track. keep up !

I agree with ^him, I would also say you need some more variation, in the main piece, but also in the intro (or shorten the intro, what I would do)
furthermore, bass sounds good, drums same (maybe turn up the hats/shakers up a tiny but?), mixdown also sounds nice!

EDIT: btw, it's in the wrong forum, you should post this in new talent and track review

Nice man! Not bad, quite liked the beat and sounds fairly clean. Although I think you should do something different with that quiet bit around 2:57, it's pretty much exactly the intro again.