LikesItHardware
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Whatever happened to commenting on the previously posted track?
THE WIP THREAD
- Thread starter RUSSLA
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nice bassline! trying to find something to bitch about.. can't find anything at the moment
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first one enough low end
second could maybe use some more
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something I've been working on a few weeks ago. and then let it rest and sort of forgot to finish it. probably will some day
same story with thise one
hmm... I'm starting to see a pattern
i'd love to listen to yours or that one before yours but they seem to be NA on soundcloud
profizeus that sounds pretty cool man, nice groove you got going
fishing for more feedback by posting in the wip thread too
Mate! This is so sick, mega impressed. Nothing to add really except personally I'd make the last 16 before the breakdown a bit more lowpassed for DJ purposes but that's just me.
Serious banger. Dub me up when it's done yeh?
nice bassline! trying to find something to bitch about.. can't find anything at the moment
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Cheers, I guess it's finished. Not traditional DnB, probably not DnB but it mixes with and i'm liking all the half tempo stuff at the moment.
first one enough low end
second could maybe use some more
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something I've been working on a few weeks ago. and then let it rest and sort of forgot to finish it. probably will some day
same story with thise one
hmm... I'm starting to see a pattern
The start to Control is amazing, the strings/pads and the vibe took me back to '92 or more recent the Bad Company era, but obviously a newer sound. I personally would inc operate that into the main tune more. Or do a minimal version, with a more filtered version of your b-line. But that's my taste, might not be to yours. Anyway, main thing is to "FINISH THEM"
i like the snare and the ambience, the bass itself needs more processing i think, it's nicely filtered but it sounds kinda basic i dunno, maybe it's the notes
thank you russla, will remember it when it's done
(you might need to click the link)
it's just 16 bars but it's like the 7th arrangement i'm trying, i think the bassgroove is getting better, you should've heard the versions before haha
Dissiopathic
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Wingz i don't found the last one you posted than i decided to listen your "infested city", that track have something amazing.. the intro with that bass and beat are awesome.. i have so much to learn! NEAT!
i leave some bars of a track i've started 3 days ago... let me know!
i leave some bars of a track i've started 3 days ago... let me know!
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crazy track man - sounds a bit enmpy tho… bass is mad… maybe some more high end distortion to get that mad fat saturated sound i think it would do well… the bass and drums are muddy as shit though can bare make the difference between the 2 but ul prob sort that out seems like early days… would,love to hear something like that in a club - id go mad
here's mine
here's mine
D-Jhepz, sounds really minimalistic and there´s something very catchy about it. I don´t know why, but it sounds really quiet. Good work on atmospherics and drums, there´s nothing wrong with them but what my hearing lacked is in-your-face bass, turn that shiet up a lil bit. All in all, sounds decent.
So today I messed around a little, made a dope bass but couldn´t make a proper drums to suit the flow. At the end of a day drums found their way into this track. I´m quite content how it sounds on all audio systems although I did veeeeery jump-into-deep-water-with-head-down mastering, I am clearly not knowing what to do in mastering stage. But I managed to hide some obvious distortion and make it loud. Still needs a lot of work, especially drums are lackluster and there´s some mud in main bass which I need to figure out. Anyway, ladies and gentleman, here´s my wip of Final Hour.
So today I messed around a little, made a dope bass but couldn´t make a proper drums to suit the flow. At the end of a day drums found their way into this track. I´m quite content how it sounds on all audio systems although I did veeeeery jump-into-deep-water-with-head-down mastering, I am clearly not knowing what to do in mastering stage. But I managed to hide some obvious distortion and make it loud. Still needs a lot of work, especially drums are lackluster and there´s some mud in main bass which I need to figure out. Anyway, ladies and gentleman, here´s my wip of Final Hour.
^ I think you've got WAY too much verb going on, muddying up everything. The kick and snare need loads more attack and mixed differently imo. I recon you should stop worrying about making it loud on the master for a good few months and work on your mixdowns, think you're jumping ahead of yourself. No point in having a loud, badly mixed tune..
Sorry to completely negative but struggling to find any good bits :/ Dont hate me.
Sorry to completely negative but struggling to find any good bits :/ Dont hate me.
https://soundcloud.com/rysk-uk/rysk-modulus-freaks-wip/s-KeFes
private link, can't embed.
32 bars of a collab with a mate, rough mix.
drums need something but i'm struggling to think what. Tear to shreds at will.
private link, can't embed.
32 bars of a collab with a mate, rough mix.
drums need something but i'm struggling to think what. Tear to shreds at will.
drums are pretty close man, something to warm them up like PSP Vintage Warmer would do it. just saturation in generally really should do it imo
Dissiopathic
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I like the beat.. the bassline is strange, maybe too much repetitve up and down up and down... i like so much the transitions.. the mix need a clean..
Here i leave 16 bar loop of a track starting this morning
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Break just needs some layers, and the kick isnt working with different velocities
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liking this man but i think the drums sound a bit too robotic?
need a bit more of a natural flow
also the needs needs some work
would like to hear the finished version
this is something i made out of samples and shit dont usually do this kind of tune
https://soundcloud.com/pathogendnb/pathogen-wip/s-J6BZJ
bit of an updated version
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@ marklar Like the new version mate sick basses and drums.
check mine wip been working on for around a week samples from pulp fiction
check mine wip been working on for around a week samples from pulp fiction
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@Junglefever I like so much how you use reverb... there are a great space/atmos in the intro.. maybe the kick is is muddy..
However the track have potential and that minimal feel is good..
I leave mine wip
However the track have potential and that minimal feel is good..
I leave mine wip