[Drum and Bass] Realize It - Pouderville

Hey Guys,

I would love to hear some reviews about my first track "pouderville". This is the Version without any compression at the Master:




I am going to give the track to an professional for the mastering. But I'm not sure about some things, e.g. the volume of the bassline.
So please tell me if you like the tune! I will commentate your tracks too!

(Sorry for my bad english - I am from austria)

if this is your first track it sounds pretty good

i think the bass is too loud

but yeah not too bad for your first go mate

Thanks for the reply!

People, please say what you think about that track - I need more feedback please

the midrange bass is too loud i think and i think that even the proffesional master engineer cant save this track.. the mixdown is bad. u have too many elements playing in the same frequency. but for a first track its not bad.

hard words for a beginner - but thank you, i will keep this in mind!

What would you suggest to "save" the track?