Blue Mar Ten - Believe Me (Menosance Remix)

[Menosance]

Hello guys it's been a while since I post a new song here.

Recently, I have downloaded the stems for Believe Me and I created my remix.

http://soundcloud.com/frteyutnckiolsnj/blu-mar-ten-believe-me

I do really need some good advice and feedback on everything, especially the mixdown/mastering stuff.

Thanks
Menosance

P.S. This is also a free download on my Facebook.
Search for 'Menosance' in the search tab.

[IV4]

It's terrible.
The lhigh lead you have following the bass is annoying 2nd only to the pitch think you got going on. I think you focus more on song structure. Then really work out your bass and drums. Once you have that then throw and fit you stabs in.

[Menosance]

Thanks for being honest

I just could not understand what you are trying to here in this quote :S

2nd only to the pitch think you got going on.

[IV4]

The pitch stabs that start at 1:31. What do you think you could do to make it better. Try it.