Dog Ears wip

[subprime]

http://soundcloud.com/subprime/dog-ears-wip

Haven't made anything in a while, I know the intro and breakdown need work, but the general thing, what do you think?

Cheers.

[oversight]

got a really cool bounce to it, i like the bass too. could do with some more fx etc going to keep it interesting, also i think the snare needs a bit more snap.

[mr meh]

Liking this one so far. Definitely onto something, would be interested to hear the finished version!

[JimpaDirt]

Intresting sounds, its like kinda weird but I like it somehow

Some fx, like oversight said. Some sweeps and such wouldn't hurt. It could bring the tune more alive!

Good job on this one

[RepliKa.DNB]

yeah mate thats fat! lovin the sounds man proper filth! check out my tunes

[RepliKa.DNB]

thats fresh!

[junglistguy2221]

bass is cool but drums sound too muffled. catchy groove, will sound really good with some more work.

[moonglow359]

scrap the tune and use the basses for a new bassline and different drums.

[subprime]

Cheers for all the comments guys, so re-work/brighten up the drums seems to be the thing. Ok

[IV4]

At 1:37 the mix seems to get better. I don't like the 16 bar hats. Don't sit well for me. Bass is cool and interesting. Sounds like a pig who found a truffle.

[subprime]

Sounds like a pig who found a truffle.

Lol, quality feedback. Appreciate the other comments as well, cheers.
Trying to rework the drums, new samples needed I think, can't get it to sit right.

[Phat_Sam]

BROCK OUT!

That bassline is hench! This is the sort of dnb I wanna be listening to atm! Just need to bring the drums forward in the mix. Make the kick n snare abour 2dB louder? As IV4 said, the hats are a little jarring.

It's pretty muddy in the 200hz - 750hz range. Think maybe something needs to be cut around 500hz? Just a bit.

Also... needs some global reverb on it. Not a lot, just enough to match it to the synth at the beginning. Something to give a bit of presence...

[ARTFX]

Sounds pretty sick mate, weird panning stuff going on in the intro.. Kinda like it though, maybe the intro should be a little less abrupt, but still good work. Bass is heavy that's for sure! Nice work, try to make the drums a little bit bigger and your on a very good way to making this a nice banger!

For the intro maybe try a part with no drums, maybe even some cinematic type stuff, think it would suit this track fairly well.

[Phat_Sam]

For the intro maybe try a part with no drums, maybe even some cinematic type stuff, think it would suit this track fairly well.

This.

[subprime]

For the intro maybe try a part with no drums, maybe even some cinematic type stuff, think it would suit this track fairly well.

Cheers guys, I was thinking something similar today when I had a fresh listen. Intro was kinda just chucked in there cos I needed one! That's a good idea about using something more ambient

Phat Sam, thanks man, I'm hoping I can polish this one off, cos parts are good and parts are shit and that's often where my tunes end!