[First attempt] Mr. Fox-Full Metal Jacket

**davidkalamar** · 09-07-2012

Hi my name is David Kalamar under the name of Mr. Fox. I've just started to dib-dab with tunes in Reason. I made my first track and any kind of feedback, comment, response, advice would really be nice. Thanks! I hope you enjoy!

http://soundcloud.com/davidkalamar/mr-fox-full-metal-jacket

**JimpaDirt** · 09-07-2012

Needs some EQ work in there. It feels like everything is just getting choked by the different elements so try to give the kick, bassline, snare etc etc its own space you know! But its really good for being a first track, it has got the energy!

Keep it up man

**davidkalamar** · 09-07-2012

Originally Posted by JimpaDirt

Needs some EQ work in there. It feels like everything is just getting choked by the different elements so try to give the kick, bassline, snare etc etc its own space you know! But its really good for being a first track, it has got the energy!

Keep it up man

Thanks, I'll definitely make those changes. I'm not quite sure how I'm gonna split the kick and the snare in Reason but I'll look it up.

**Fatkidscantjump** · 09-07-2012

Agree with that needs EQ work, not bad for a first song. Try to make build ups by cuttin drums / adding risers etc.

Also listening it with headphones the synth/bass distorded sound that comes at the beginning of each 4bars I believe comes mostly in my right ear its kind of disturbing.

**davidkalamar** · 10-07-2012

Originally Posted by Fatkidscantjump

Agree with that needs EQ work, not bad for a first song. Try to make build ups by cuttin drums / adding risers etc.

Also listening it with headphones the synth/bass distorded sound that comes at the beginning of each 4bars I believe comes mostly in my right ear its kind of disturbing.

Thanks for the advice. I didn't hear the bass thing on speakers. Since I have managed to fix that and I'm gonna be focusing on EQ and drums as you said. You are right. Thanks once more. Big ups!