another wee dnb ting i been working on

[emersonsamuels]

nz dnb
http://soundcloud.com/nosreme/dhokk
second dnb tune i've tried to make
critisicm and feed back is invited and needed.
chur

[ApeCat]

I think it sounds nice but is far too long and lacking in percussion and the hats are far too quiet, especially when they're playing on their own.

[emersonsamuels]

I think it sounds nice but is far too long and lacking in percussion and the hats are far too quiet, especially when they're playing on their own.

thanks, i've got no real idea what i'm doing, so your feedback is much appreciated.
hah yeah 10min is way too long, i struggle to get the "structure" i want in a song whilst still having it not be wayy too long

[emersonsamuels]