Yo Jesus

[Fatkidscantjump]

So thats the track i'm working on right now.

I really need feedbacks and advices please, since I dont know anyone IRL that can really give me advices as a producer and not as a simple listener, you guys are my only way to know what other producers think.

Any kind of feedback, criticism, etc is really appreciated as long as you can developp a little what you liked / what you didnt like / what should i do to improve etc etc etc.

thanks a lot for your time, cheers!

peace

http://soundcloud.com/eargasm-1/yo-jesus

[IV4]

The pad could use more texture. Not a bad song at all. Just needs to be more dynamic. Like those little beeps with the reverb. Change them up to add subtle tention. Change the pad at the right point along with the bass notation to add a melodic harmonic character that defines and satisfies the feeling of the song. That build up noise is that a stock massive sound? I think I reconize it.
The little voice in the break in part two seems to come out a bit louder and get annoying. Use more cadence.
Over all not a bad song. Needs more dynamics. But I think you have a great start.