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    A little wip i'm working on - Need advices !

    Hi there,

    So i've been working on this lately, i'm still a beginner at production but I thought I might post this cause i'm on the point where i cant get inspiration to add new things to the tracks and i need some fresh ears and advices / feedback.

    http://soundcloud.com/eargasm-1/untitled-work-in-progress

    thanks you for your time, i really appreciate it !

    cheers
    http://soundcloud.com/azoteliquid

    Have a listen if you feel like it, i'm looking for any advices and feedbacks

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    Re: A little wip i'm working on - Need advices !

    Sounds good to me. A little boring. Needs more variation. Not a bad song.

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    Re: A little wip i'm working on - Need advices !

    hey there,
    nice tune m8.
    from 1.54 to 2.54 its pretty much the same riff tho.
    maybe chuck a break down/build up in that region to add a bit more interest.
    peace

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    Re: A little wip i'm working on - Need advices !

    Quote Originally Posted by jimjimjim View Post
    hey there,
    nice tune m8.
    from 1.54 to 2.54 its pretty much the same riff tho.
    maybe chuck a break down/build up in that region to add a bit more interest.
    peace
    yep thats what i've been struggling on the past few days...

    Everything i'm trying seems to sound cheesy or just not going with the vibe, i'm really runnin out of ideas... Will take a 1-2 days break before trying over and over again.

    thanks for the feedback guys
    http://soundcloud.com/azoteliquid

    Have a listen if you feel like it, i'm looking for any advices and feedbacks

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    Re: A little wip i'm working on - Need advices !

    break down ideas - keep one of the elements running into the break down (bass/pad) and drop everything else - then you can build up into a new section how you like.
    by leaving one element runnign into it the flow is still there.
    or drop everything but the hats - see where it takes you

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    Re: A little wip i'm working on - Need advices !

    Quote Originally Posted by jimjimjim View Post
    break down ideas - keep one of the elements running into the break down (bass/pad) and drop everything else - then you can build up into a new section how you like.
    by leaving one element runnign into it the flow is still there.
    or drop everything but the hats - see where it takes you
    yep after hours of trying to make an other "drop" i just cutted the mid bassline, let the sub going to get the groove, and add some new pads to the break.
    Here where I'm so far

    http://soundcloud.com/eargasm-1/untitled
    http://soundcloud.com/azoteliquid

    Have a listen if you feel like it, i'm looking for any advices and feedbacks

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