A little wip i'm working on - Need advices !

[Fatkidscantjump]

Hi there,

So i've been working on this lately, i'm still a beginner at production but I thought I might post this cause i'm on the point where i cant get inspiration to add new things to the tracks and i need some fresh ears and advices / feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/eargasm-1/untitled-work-in-progress

thanks you for your time, i really appreciate it !

cheers

[IV4]

Sounds good to me. A little boring. Needs more variation. Not a bad song.

[jimjimjim]

hey there,
nice tune m8.
from 1.54 to 2.54 its pretty much the same riff tho.
maybe chuck a break down/build up in that region to add a bit more interest.
peace

[Fatkidscantjump]

hey there,
nice tune m8.
from 1.54 to 2.54 its pretty much the same riff tho.
maybe chuck a break down/build up in that region to add a bit more interest.
peace

yep thats what i've been struggling on the past few days...

Everything i'm trying seems to sound cheesy or just not going with the vibe, i'm really runnin out of ideas... Will take a 1-2 days break before trying over and over again.

thanks for the feedback guys

[jimjimjim]

break down ideas - keep one of the elements running into the break down (bass/pad) and drop everything else - then you can build up into a new section how you like.
by leaving one element runnign into it the flow is still there.
or drop everything but the hats - see where it takes you

[Fatkidscantjump]

break down ideas - keep one of the elements running into the break down (bass/pad) and drop everything else - then you can build up into a new section how you like.
by leaving one element runnign into it the flow is still there.
or drop everything but the hats - see where it takes you

yep after hours of trying to make an other "drop" i just cutted the mid bassline, let the sub going to get the groove, and add some new pads to the break.
Here where I'm so far

http://soundcloud.com/eargasm-1/untitled