Jump Up

[junglistguy2221]

http://soundcloud.com/chrishawker/untitled-jump-up

work in progress at the mo, any opinions pls?

UPDATED:

http://soundcloud.com/chrishawker/what-you-got

[Norwax]

sounds nice, reminds me of taxman and that's good

[IV4]

Woop woop whooommmppp.

[Hynt]

imo it needs something melodic over the top of the bass in some sections to add more interest and more variation in the bass

[Bad Ace]

or if not melody sum atmospherics

imo it needs something melodic over the top of the bass in some sections to add more interest and more variation in the bass

[DnBnSmoke]

Sounding damn great and nasty. I'd just mix down a lil' bit the hats.

[DeeGun]

sounds nice, reminds me of taxman and that's good

sounds nothing like Taxman and that indeed is good. I like it!!

[junglistguy2221]

cheers for the feedback and positive comments, i'll get to work on my next version

[bull3tpr00f]

cool track man. keep it up!

[marcelkennard]

Yeah those hats are a bit awful but the rest is good

[DeeGun]

Yeah those hats are a bit awful but the rest is good

can you please elaborate cause I don´t see any awfulness in the hats

[gingerDoe]

I like it but you probably want little bit constructive critics

the closed hi hat is little bit too loud,I believe if you put it down anything between 1-3db down would be good,it sounds nice in home but that loud hi hat would be at crazy loud levels of like for example fabric audiosystem harsh to ear,high freqencies can becose especialy harsh at loud levels


also I would put some very high passed brigh shadow break there,to fill out the hi end

[junglistguy2221]

cheers for the advice people, I appreciate it

[prettyherb]

The concept is great mate . I like it that you change the sound after 4 times. Imo, i would ad some more lighter hihats also, for some more variation. Also, when there's no bass playing, add some fx, vocal sample ect... This can be a banger mate

[mistasfx]

drums are decent. bass n melody gets boring very quickly i think, needs more sounds to bounce off the bass and theres some phasing issues on some of the bass notes