mix sounds good in the intro, i like the kit and the vibe. i know this is a WIP but a little more variation in the intro maybe. the drop sounds nice but sounds disconnected from the intro. i would bring the delay sound back sooner. and usually i think the porn moan is cheesy, but i think you could use one or two more here. nice sounds though, good tune.
Another nice tune matey.
Personaly I like how the bass comes in after the intro, doesn't sound too disconected to me.
Main thing I'd have done is shorten the intro. Gotta admit, although it sounds nice, I skipped a chunk of it.
Keep up the good work man.
i think ur kick drum sounds a little overcompressed and flat.. maybe change the sample . also your main pad could use some more fx on it, maybe some more changes and variation too, like a bridge with a totally different melody/bassline