Jump Up Track - Work In Progress [Feedback Wanted!] REASON 6

[[Hedfone]]

This is an idea for a jump up track, but I'm not sure what to do with it. The drop needs "something" to fill it out. Perhaps some hi's and cymbals, maybe a little hi-synth.

Anyway, check it and any feedback is appreciated!

http://soundcloud.com/vurso/help-i-am-locked-out-of-the

[parsons19]

I ain't that much of a jaaaamppppp upppppp man myself but I really enjoyed that!

I know its pretty simple but I really digged that sidechaining in the intro. Nice wub wub thingys too

You answered your own question, give us some highs and it will be good!

[Recon DNB]

I really enjoyed that track, keep it up mate.

[cptunicorn]

really digging the intro. sounds like you added some sweet arcade game sounds.

the break 00:22 needs improving. try to create a bigger atmosphere. add more elements/synths/highs. if youre going for the arcade sound, maybe add in some sweet cartoon voices (like in dirtyphonics - french fuck).

idea for the drop is really good, but its gotta be bigger. more in the face. definately fits the track. add in some highs.

great track till now! keep me posted mate!

cheers

[[Hedfone]]

Thanks for the positive feedback guys, I wasn't expecting much of a response because 2 minutes after I created this post Soundcloud went down for an hour.. Great luck ey..

I'll work with it, add some tings here and there and see what happens. Cheers chaps!