hit girl

**dj_freakshow** · 27-03-2012

http://soundcloud.com/freakshow_fonzy/hit-girl

god only knows what style this is. and i done 90% of it using headphones, so no idea about how the mixdown sounds. possible WIP depending on the negatives lmao

and feedback appreciated

**dj_freakshow** · 28-03-2012

anyone? >,<

*shameless bump

**miszt** · 28-03-2012

pitch bend that bass to fuk, and i think it'll start to bounce more like you want, nice sounds so far, will have a proper listen on monitors later

**dj_freakshow** · 28-03-2012

Originally Posted by miszt

pitch bend that bass to fuk, and i think it'll start to bounce more like you want, nice sounds so far, will have a proper listen on monitors later

maybe i could have used higher notes >,< lol thanks

**jobro** · 28-03-2012

This tune is kinda newbish. Don't get me wrong, but you really need to focus on getting your arrangement right The two basses collides almost, and they have a kinda awkward tonality to them. Way too repetitive for it's own good. Drums is kinda OK I suppose, but they need also to be morphed around to come better alive.

Rating: 1.7/5.

**dj_freakshow** · 28-03-2012

Originally Posted by jobro

This tune is kinda newbish. Don't get me wrong, but you really need to focus on getting your arrangement right The two basses collides almost, and they have a kinda awkward tonality to them. Way too repetitive for it's own good. Drums is kinda OK I suppose, but they need also to be morphed around to come better alive.

Rating: 1.7/5.

new? i've been doing it for a whole 3 months! lol

how can i work on my arrangements better? and what do you mean by morph around? thanks for commenting...

**ExplodingMan** · 29-03-2012

Liking the sample, maybe layer some atmospherics over it to add a bit of eeriness. Into could be a bit shorter on the whole and maybe wait a bit and put the sub in when the drums drop as well, might add a bit more impact. Saaafe.