New - Deformed (Deep Drum & Bass) Feed back please!

[Thierry D]

Hello am Thierry and new to the forum only been producing D&B a short time but i feel every time i try my Intro and outro are to short just wondering is 16 or 32bars beat to short ?
what is best for beat mixing bars?
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-d/thierry-d-deformed-original-1
This is a new tune

feed back please!
thanks
Thierry

[Ritual]

i like this man,

bit more top end in the drums...

tighten up your EQ

and, that lead isn't to my ears at all!!!!

[Thierry D]

Thanks for the feedback!

will work on it..

by the way are you Ritual from Australia?