unmd - earth

**unmd** · 07-03-2012

Easy folks

After next amount of lessons using trail-and-error method I come with next track from me.

http://soundcloud.com/mr_zoom/earth
Advices and criticising are welcome.

**luciduk** · 08-03-2012

hey man this is wicked considering you are 16, beat is rather solid and melody is sweet. Mixdown and tidyness still can improve, but forget the negatives - keep working on it and you can do rather well from starting at that age. peace!

**Nucleoid** · 08-03-2012

The snare could have a bit more punch. shorten it, and cut some highs, while boosting some midlows 150-300hz (often 225 works good)
Also bring up the kick a bit

Getting there mate!

**unmd** · 08-03-2012

Originally Posted by luciduk

hey man this is wicked considering you are 16, beat is rather solid and melody is sweet. Mixdown and tidyness still can improve, but forget the negatives - keep working on it and you can do rather well from starting at that age. peace!

Cheers buddy! :)

Originally Posted by Nucleoid

The snare could have a bit more punch. shorten it, and cut some highs, while boosting some midlows 150-300hz (often 225 works good)
Also bring up the kick a bit ;)

Getting there mate!

I'll improve it, I swear :P.