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    [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    Eepz people, here i am with a new attempt making my own music

    Please checkout my track, and please tell me what to do better!!

    http://soundcloud.com/evasionbe/evasion-the-cure-clip

    Enjoy listening!
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    Re: [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    nice track ! interesting arrangement and sections
    You could work on the snare to make it sound a bit more tight, it lacks that punch and nastiness you usually find on Jump up.
    the vocal sample might need a bit more processing, and its not loud enough on the second part.

    its a good track mate ! bigups

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    Re: [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    Quote Originally Posted by Atmos-Fear View Post
    nice track ! interesting arrangement and sections
    You could work on the snare to make it sound a bit more tight, it lacks that punch and nastiness you usually find on Jump up.
    the vocal sample might need a bit more processing, and its not loud enough on the second part.

    its a good track mate ! bigups
    Tnx mate! Any advice on how to get that punchy snare?? Been trying to get it for AGES!

    I'll also try to make the vocal better.

    Anyone else who can give me some pos/neg feedback?

    Tnx!
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    Re: [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    BUMP?
    Bass music for the globe.

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    Eazy- Raw Like Cocaine- Sorted Seizure Remix

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    Enjoy!!

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    Re: [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    Hi

    Snare - Layer, EQ, compress, Layer, EQ, compress - till you reach the desired effect. Layer snares which sound similar, let say you have 3 snares eq it differently. Look on google, find the eq ranges to beef up the snare.

    Track sound promising, not a great listener of jump up but I like it.

    Work on the sound, and it should be ok.

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    Re: [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    Quote Originally Posted by paracyte View Post
    Hi

    Snare - Layer, EQ, compress, Layer, EQ, compress - till you reach the desired effect. Layer snares which sound similar, let say you have 3 snares eq it differently. Look on google, find the eq ranges to beef up the snare.

    Track sound promising, not a great listener of jump up but I like it.

    Work on the sound, and it should be ok.

    cheers,
    Tnx dude!! I'll keep this in mind!!
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    [SOUNDCLOUDhttp://soundcloud.com/sortedseizur/evasion-the-cube-vip-free[/SOUNDCLOUD]


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    Re: [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    not too keen on the first bass but likin the second sound
    mix sounds a bit wierd and at places the kick sounds odd?
    quite like the drums but as i said go a bit wierd at point like over compressed??
    good start tho mate

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    Re: [Jump- Up] Evasion- The Cure WIP /// Feedback Appreciated!

    Quote Originally Posted by DJ MARLOK View Post
    not too keen on the first bass but likin the second sound
    mix sounds a bit wierd and at places the kick sounds odd?
    quite like the drums but as i said go a bit wierd at point like over compressed??
    good start tho mate
    Uhm this is the first stuf i produced with headphone, for better stereo shizzle. In there my kick sounds good, but indeed, when i play it on my logitech- soundsystem, it doesn't even sound like a kick anymore :p
    I thought my subwoofer was broken . But maybe it's indeed the kick that's overcompressed. Tnx for the remark dude!
    Bass music for the globe.

    Latest tunes:

    Eazy- Raw Like Cocaine- Sorted Seizure Remix

    http://soundcloud.com/sortedseizur/dj-eazy-raw-like-cocaine

    Evasion aka Sorted Seizure- The Cube VIP
    [SOUNDCLOUDhttp://soundcloud.com/sortedseizur/evasion-the-cube-vip-free[/SOUNDCLOUD]


    Enjoy!!

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