Sound good to me mate. Listening with crappy headphone atm, but definitely a good start. You introduce the bass three times before it finally drops which sounds strange to me perhaps if you wonna tease the bass in you could tail off each little cut if you see what I mean? Before the drop happens you could build a crescendo then cut to silence for a quarter or half a bar before slamming the beat in. Think your kick and snare need to come allot more. Sounds a bit woolly in places, this should be sorted out with eq, roll off any unnecessary lows etc. I love the overall feel though some great movement to the track as a whole and some lovely creepy klangy noizes. Kool!