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    new on the cloud...Top Gun by Redbeard (dnb)

    so i've been more productive than i thought...any thoughts are appreciated.



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    Re: new on the cloud...Top Gun by Redbeard (dnb)

    nice production man, not my thing atall but it dont sound bad... umm i guess constructiv critism i would say the beat should just be pulled together, hi hats sound a little seperated from the main beat and the snare could do with being compressed. well its a nicely thought out tune man good structure and drop and that but definatly not my thing

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    Re: new on the cloud...Top Gun by Redbeard (dnb)

    thanks man, appreciate it.

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    Re: new on the cloud...Top Gun by Redbeard (dnb)

    I really like the melody in this one mate, it's varied and very catchy!

    I'd have to agree with Lucid on the drum work though. Hi hats sound like they are too hi passed, maybe lower the high end on the eq a little and raise it a touch in the high mids. Snare also sounds like it's reverbed / echoed? Maybe it's just the sample, try cutting the tail off it a little.

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    Re: new on the cloud...Top Gun by Redbeard (dnb)

    haven't really finished the mix here, so i still can adjust... thanks for the suggestions

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