First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

[Yellaman]

Just got into producin' properly, finished my first tune.
let us know what you think....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IxWDpTA-4zE


Cheers!

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[MrWoggles]

Very good for a first track.

[Yellaman]

Safe, nice one man.

[Delinquent]

Nice sounds but not enough development. You could pad it out with some variation or a drop.

[Yellaman]

Nice sounds but not enough development. You could pad it out with some variation or a drop.

what do you mean mate by development man?
the tune has got a drop.

[Yellaman]

Bump

[Delinquent]

My mistake...

I just mean... different parts to it... But that's just my opinion it's hard to put what I mean into words.

[Yellaman]

yeayea, i understand what you mean.
cheers for the feedback!

[vickvega]

sounds good for a first track bro-keep at it

[Yellaman]

Cheers mate

[TongueFlap]

soundin good.. bit more variation and it would be spanking