New Cringer track needs your critique!

[cringer]

hello all...just finished up this track and i hope you'll give it a listen and tell me what you think-
Cringer - Melting Pot (http://www.parttimesuckers.com/cringer_-_melting_pot.mp3)

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[junglist soldie]

Good build up very fresh great vocal :angry2: if the beat's and bass were loader this tune would be better, wicked change up's on the amen's though.
good tune :banana:

[KidKut]

Like the bassline and vocals, the above is about right, quality tune but you just need to work on some of the levels of the beats in places, some are a little quiet mainly where your buiding up.

Tight though mate, i like it :)

[cringer]

word up!

[freeagent]

Not really into ragga, but the drum edit are great.

[Dj pfo]

The drums are a little stale for me, and there's not really a whole lot going on in the song. Not much of a big fan of overly crazy amen breaks either, but it's well mastered and put together. I think you need some more... progressive changeups on the drums, especially in the intro. Maybe a little more melody too.

[mumblz]

dope man..feelin it
raggae vocals..ehh they r ok,can do w/out though:P
tune is dope though..kool break
242 is dope....amen can use a bost of the kick
303 great edits brooooooo :) deff feelin these

overall...i think its on of the better produced tunes i heard recently:) great drum edits
mumzzzzzzzzzzzz