now i will participate...

[grandpimp]

hello

for a while i have been a spectator at dnbforum. now i will
participate. please review my tracks. i would LOVE some heart-breaking,
ego-shattering, kick-in-the-balls criticism coz i want to get some dub
plates pressed and i don't want to blow fifty bucks if the tracks aren't
hot.


"it's only a northern alliance" (http://www.citizen-strange.com/northern.html)


"mr. shiny bumpers" (http://www.citizen-strange.com/shiny.html)



peace and respect-
citizen strange

if you have some time and brain cells to kill, download the other free mp3's
at...

www.citizen-strange.com (http://www.citizen-strange.com/)

[grandpimp]

hellooooo

is there anybody out there?

[logikz]

right!
listening to nothern alliance.

lower bpm number in favour of the oldskool breaks i presume
the dread warp bass!
so in what enviroment did you write this?
asking cos the production quality exceeds the actual tune
the material sounds very novice (just my opinion of course!)
structure is good and you got a lot of good ideas and ill be looking forward to future material from you!!!
i think you should wait a while before you cut anything to dubs.

[grandpimp]

it's fairly slow bpm for dnb coz it started as a remix of "bombs over baghdad" (outkast), so it wasn't like i got to choose the tempo. i did it all in protools.

thanks for the review!

[grandpimp]

"the material sounds very novice"

- that's just the kick in the balls i was looking for. heh heh.