Check out my new tunes - Opinions please!!

[MiL0]

Hello all,
Please feel free to check out my new tunes:
kunt phlapp (http://www.electronicscene.com/studioviper)
and...
Da Drop (http://www.electronicscene.com/sicsoundz)
The first tune is a techstep roller with a funked-up bass line; probably my best produced tune to date, the 2nd is a more 'propa-mash-up' effort with tramen drums and hoover bass (u know the kinda ting)

All constructive criticism welcome!

[logikz]

hey man
your cunt tune has got really fuckin good sound, clean as a whistle. Good mix and GOOD compression. Cool break and really cool synths, is that a real virus? Love the synths.

negative: The low end bass line isnt on hit and i dont think it drops hard enough at all. Structurally its a bit scattered and thats the main problem of the tune, if you got the structure up a bit stronger the bassline would hit so much harder (i.e with some break trickery and swooshing synths to bring them in)

thats constructive yes?

[MiL0]

spot on mate... that's exactly the things that are on my "to do" list... the *improved* version should be up by the end of the week.

...and then it's down to the dub plate cutters for me!

They are both at number 1 and number 2 in the weekly charts, and number 1 and number 4 in the monthly charts... 'electronicscene.com!!!' ---- sort me out with some free web space!!! hehe...

M.

[Murkee]

Definetly dope. But as he said and you replied the bass does need to hit. I dont really here a distiguishable bass until the end.

but very tight track.